Kokinshu 25
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Text
歌たてまつれとおほせられし時によみてたてまつれる
つらゆき
わがせこが 衣春雨 ふるごとに 野辺のみどりぞ 色まさりける
Translation
When [the Emperor] said "Submit a poem," [Tsurayuki] read this and submitted it.
[Ki no] Tsurayuki
My husband's / clothing the spring rain / every time it falls / the green of the fields / grows a shade deeper.
Notes
(See poem 22 for notes on the prose preface, which is the same)
- わがせこが
- This phrase has been subject to a great deal of commentary. Early commenters such as Template:Oldest interpreted せこ as "wife" here. But later scholars reject the idea that せこ can have this meaning. Template:Nativist thought this was a mistake for わぎもこ. Template:Denju seemed to take the position that the first lines were simply a 序 (preface) and did not refer to any actual people. These interpretations seem to have come from the early scholars' interpreting the わが as Tsurayuki himself. But Template:Edo recognized that men composing poems in the voice of women is quite common during the Heian period, and modern scholars agree that Tsurayuki is using this technique here.
- The second question is about the が; is this a possessive or a subject marker? Since women were typically the clothes washers, Katagiri's reading of this as the possessive seems appropriate.
- 衣春雨
- This is a pivot construction, taking はる as 衣を張る (stretch out clothes when washing) and 春雨 (spring rain). This makes the first two lines a preface, but scholars differ on what type of preface it is -- see the analysis for more details.
Analysis
Other sources
- 新選和歌33
- 古今和歌六帖464・雨・貫之. Line 3 ふるからに
- 千五百番歌合103判詞. The judge criticized the Left's poem (わぎもこが衣はるさめふるからにすそのの草ぞいろまさりゆく by Sanuki) for being too close to KKS 25 and awarded the victory to the Right.
- 秀歌大体 三五記 定家八代抄
- 俊頼髄脳 袖中抄 歌林良材 和歌密書
