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= Textual Notes =
= Textual Notes =


* 侍ける] ける(堀・安)
* あひわたり] あひたり(新ィ)
* 忠国] 国忠(堀・承・正)、作者ナシ(荒)
* 侍ける] ける(堀・安・正保・旧国・八・増・標・新)
* 忠国] 国忠(堀・慶・承・正・新ィ)、作者ナシ(荒)
* ほのかに] ほのぼの(堀)
* ほのかに] ほのぼの(堀)
* かくしつつ] よくてのみ(堀*)
* かくしつつ] よくてのみ(堀*)
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= Notes =
= Notes =
;しのびてあひわたる
:From when they first met to now, the meetings have been secret.
;いざりびの
:These are things you see at night, far away, faintly. So this works as a pillow word for ほのかに (there are examples in MYS).
;かくしつつ
:This is かく "like this" + し + つつ (宣長). A play on that and 隠しつつ(others).
;こひのした
:This means that if the love isn't public he will die (新抄). The 火 will disappear (全釈・新体系). Both (新注).


= Analysis =
= Analysis =
We have to meet like the fisher at night, and if this continues I will die (新抄). This is a sad poem that evokes the image of a distant, faint light that will soon be extinguished (全釈). He wants to make their love public (和歌大系).
漁火、夜魚をとる蟹のともす火也。よるよるはほのかにあひみて、常には逢ねば、かやうにしつつ有経なば遂に恋の下に消果るにてあらんと也。(八)


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しのびてあひわたり侍けるひとに

藤原忠国

いざり火の よるはほのかに かくしつゝ 有へばこひの したにけぬべし

Translation

Textual Notes

  • あひわたり] あひたり(新ィ)
  • 侍ける] ける(堀・安・正保・旧国・八・増・標・新)
  • 忠国] 国忠(堀・慶・承・正・新ィ)、作者ナシ(荒)
  • ほのかに] ほのぼの(堀)
  • かくしつつ] よくてのみ(堀*)
  • したにけぬべし] ながくへぬべし(堀*)、なかにへぬべし(荒・片*)

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Notes

しのびてあひわたる
From when they first met to now, the meetings have been secret.
いざりびの
These are things you see at night, far away, faintly. So this works as a pillow word for ほのかに (there are examples in MYS).
かくしつつ
This is かく "like this" + し + つつ (宣長). A play on that and 隠しつつ(others).
こひのした
This means that if the love isn't public he will die (新抄). The 火 will disappear (全釈・新体系). Both (新注).

Analysis

We have to meet like the fisher at night, and if this continues I will die (新抄). This is a sad poem that evokes the image of a distant, faint light that will soon be extinguished (全釈). He wants to make their love public (和歌大系).

漁火、夜魚をとる蟹のともす火也。よるよるはほのかにあひみて、常には逢ねば、かやうにしつつ有経なば遂に恋の下に消果るにてあらんと也。(八)

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