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わが袖は　なにたつすゑの　松山か　そらより浪の　こえぬ日はなし

Sent to a man

Tosa

Are my sleeves the famous Sue no Matsuyama? There is no day where waves from the sky don't cross me.

詞書ナシ（坊）
もとに] もとへ（荒・片）
わが袖] わかりて（片）
そらより] うらより（荒・片・安*・雲・坊・正保ィ・増ィ・標ィ・新ィ・旧国ィ）Norinaga thought the そら reading was better.
こえぬ] こひぬ（正#)
日はなし] 日もなし（貞）

名に立つ: This also refers to the rumor of his broken pledge, but also leads to Sue no Matsuyama (新抄). The 末 also means あげく (全釈).

This represents the soaking tears on the sleeve (八). This is because the man's heart has changed, and she cries all the time (新抄).

KKS 1093: 君をおきてあだし心をわがもたばすゑの松山浪もこえなん. Although in this poem the waves are crossing (新抄).

「男にあざむかれて、その約束の違うことを怨んだ歌である。...句切った上句に強い感情がこめられている」（鑑賞）

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 * もとに] もとへ（荒・片）
 * わが袖] わかりて（片）
-* そらより] うらより（荒・片・安*・雲・坊・正保ィ・旧国ィ）
+* そらより] うらより（荒・片・安*・雲・坊・正保ィ・増ィ・標ィ・新ィ・旧国ィ）Norinaga thought the そら reading was better.
 * こえぬ] こひぬ（正#)
 * 日はなし] 日もなし（貞）
 = Other Sources =
+* [[五代歌枕]] [[歌枕名寄]] (both read うら)
+* 源氏注・末摘花
 = Notes =
+;名に立つ
+:This also refers to the rumor of his broken pledge, but also leads to Sue no Matsuyama (新抄). The 末 also means あげく (全釈).
+;そら
+:This also refers to the man's words being 空言 (新注).
 = Analysis =
+This represents the soaking tears on the sleeve (八). This is because the man's heart has changed, and she cries all the time (新抄).
+KKS 1093: 君をおきてあだし心をわがもたばすゑの松山浪もこえなん. Although in this poem the waves are crossing (新抄).
+「男にあざむかれて、その約束の違うことを怨んだ歌である。...句切った上句に強い感情がこめられている」（鑑賞）
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