Shuishu 1 - Revision history

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	Otomo no Yakamochi		Otomo no Yakamochi

	春の<ruby>の<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>に　あさるき<ruby>ぎ<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>~~すの　つまごひに　をのがありかを　人にしれつ~~<ruby>つ<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>		春の<ruby>の<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>に　あさるき<ruby>ぎ<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>すの　つまごひに　<ruby>お<rt>を</rt></ruby>のがありかを　人にしれつ<ruby>つ<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>

			In the spring field / the pheasant searching out food / its cries for its mate / make known to people (5) / its own dwelling place (4).

	* (Teika's note) 万		* (Teika's note) 万
	* つまごひに] つまごひて（八イ）		* つまごひに] つまごひて（八イ）

			;[[Glossary H#はるのの\|春のの]]

	;[[Glossary A#あさる\|あさる]]		;[[Glossary A#あさる\|あさる]]

	;[[Glossary K#きぎす\|きぎす]]		;[[Glossary K#きぎす\|きぎす]]

			;[[Glossary T#つまごひ\|つまごひ]]に
			:The cry of the pheasant is poetically interpreted here as the bird crying out longing for its mate. 「妻を恋い慕って鳴き立て」（新体系）

	;しれつつ		;しれつつ
	:「しられつつといふ事也」(能因歌枕, 僻案抄)		:る here is a passive, an alternate for らる.「しられつつといふ事也」(能因歌枕, 僻案抄). The つつ indicates repeated activity.

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	「或人云：春の野の草深き中に住むきぎすの、人に知られずしてあるべきを、声をたつるによりて、その在処を表すなり。なまじに声をたつるといへば、妻を恋ふるによりてはり。さて、そ狩人にも得られて命をも失ふものにて侍る鳥といへども、はかなき恋に身を亡ぼす哀れなるならひなり。「人にしれつつ」とばかりよみて、後に狩人にあはんといふことをばいひ残したる詞なり。上古の歌は深く思い入りたる心あるゆへに、詞には足らぬぞ多かる。よくよく味はふべきなり」（増抄）		In the setting of the SIS, this poem focuses on the scene of a field with a crying bird. It is a slight variant of a MYS original that also is classified as a spring poem. However, it may also have a hidden love meaning as well. Some commentaries suggest a secondary meaning of destroying one's own body for love, possibly due to the 人 being interpreted as a hunter that will find the bird due to its cries. 「或人云：春の野の草深き中に住むきぎすの、人に知られずしてあるべきを、声をたつるによりて、その在処を表すなり。なまじに声をたつるといへば、妻を恋ふるによりてはり。さて、そ狩人にも得られて命をも失ふものにて侍る鳥といへども、はかなき恋に身を亡ぼす哀れなるならひなり。「人にしれつつ」とばかりよみて、後に狩人にあはんといふことをばいひ残したる詞なり。上古の歌は深く思い入りたる心あるゆへに、詞には足らぬぞ多かる。よくよく味はふべきなり」（増抄）「恋のために身を滅ぼす、という余情がある」（新体系）

	~~古今和歌六帖１１７８~~ is ~~perhaps~~ a variant of ~~this~~ poem ~~rewritten~~ to ~~eliminate some of~~ the ~~Nara-period language: 春ののにあさなくきじのつまごひにおのがありかを人にしられて~~

	~~KKR 670 霞たつこせの春野になくきぎすいつかありかを人にしらるる~~

	~~GYS 113 おのがつま恋ひわびにけり春の野にあさるきぎすの朝な朝な鳴く~~

			This poem was favored by Kinto and included in several of his collections of good poetry, but not in the ''Shuisho'' itself. Teika also included it in his late ''Teika hachidaisho'' collection of good poetry.

			There are several other poems that are quite close in meaning to this poem or are perhaps using this poem as a 本歌:

			* 古今和歌六帖１１７８ is perhaps a variant of this poem rewritten to eliminate some of the Nara-period language: 春ののにあさなくきじのつまごひにおのがありかを人にしられて
			* 古今和歌六帖６７０霞たつこせの春野になくきぎすいつかありかを人にしらるる
			* 古今和歌集１０３３平貞文　春の野のしげき草ばのつまごひにとびたつきじのほろろとぞなく
			* 玉葉和歌集１１３鎌倉右大臣　おのがつま恋ひわびにけり春の野にあさるきぎすの朝な朝な鳴く

	Other sources:		[[Sources\|Other sources]]:
	* 万葉集 v8, １４５０. Prose preface 大伴宿祢家持春雉歌一首. Text: 春野尓（ハルノノニ）　安佐留雉乃（アサルキギスノ）　妻恋尓（ツマゴヒニ）　己我当乎（オノガアタリヲ）　人尓令知管（ヒトニシレツツ）		* 万葉集 v8, １４５０. Prose preface 大伴宿祢家持春雉歌一首. Text: 春野尓（ハルノノニ）　安佐留雉乃（アサルキギスノ）　妻恋尓（ツマゴヒニ）　己我当乎（オノガアタリヲ）　人尓令知管（ヒトニシレツツ）
	* 赤人集１１６. Fifth line 人にしられつつ.		* 赤人集１１６. Fifth line 人にしられつつ.
	* 金玉集　三十人集　三十六人集　深窓秘抄　定家八代抄		* 金玉集　三十人集　三十六人集　深窓秘抄　定家八代抄
	* 能因歌枕　隆源口伝　袖中抄　色葉和難集		* 能因歌枕　隆源口伝　袖中抄　色葉和難集

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	* (Teika's note) 万		* (Teika's note) 万
			* つまごひに] つまごひて（八イ）

	;[[Glossary A#あさる\|あさる]]		;[[Glossary A#あさる\|あさる]]
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			「或人云：春の野の草深き中に住むきぎすの、人に知られずしてあるべきを、声をたつるによりて、その在処を表すなり。なまじに声をたつるといへば、妻を恋ふるによりてはり。さて、そ狩人にも得られて命をも失ふものにて侍る鳥といへども、はかなき恋に身を亡ぼす哀れなるならひなり。「人にしれつつ」とばかりよみて、後に狩人にあはんといふことをばいひ残したる詞なり。上古の歌は深く思い入りたる心あるゆへに、詞には足らぬぞ多かる。よくよく味はふべきなり」（増抄）

	古今和歌六帖１１７８ is perhaps a variant of this poem rewritten to eliminate some of the Nara-period language: 春ののにあさなくきじのつまごひにおのがありかを人にしられて		古今和歌六帖１１７８ is perhaps a variant of this poem rewritten to eliminate some of the Nara-period language: 春ののにあさなくきじのつまごひにおのがありかを人にしられて

			KKR 670 霞たつこせの春野になくきぎすいつかありかを人にしらるる

			GYS 113 おのがつま恋ひわびにけり春の野にあさるきぎすの朝な朝な鳴く

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	;[[Glossary A#あさる\|あさる]]		;[[Glossary A#あさる\|あさる]]

			;[[Glossary K#きぎす\|きぎす]]

	;しれつつ		;しれつつ

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	* (Teika's note) 万		* (Teika's note) 万

			;[[Glossary A#あさる\|あさる]]

			;しれつつ
			:「しられつつといふ事也」(能因歌枕, 僻案抄)

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			古今和歌六帖１１７８ is perhaps a variant of this poem rewritten to eliminate some of the Nara-period language: 春ののにあさなくきじのつまごひにおのがありかを人にしられて


	Other sources:		Other sources:

Jchristo at 18:37, 27 April 2022

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	* 秘蔵抄　俊頼髄脳　奥儀抄　瑩玉集　色葉和歌集　五代歌枕　歌枕名寄　玉伝集和歌最頂　和歌密書　歌林良材		* 秘蔵抄　俊頼髄脳　奥儀抄　瑩玉集　色葉和歌集　五代歌枕　歌枕名寄　玉伝集和歌最頂　和歌密書　歌林良材
	* 秀歌大体　古来風体抄　近代秀歌　詠歌大体　詠歌一体　三五記　井蛙抄　沙石集定家八代抄　八代集秀逸		* 秀歌大体　古来風体抄　近代秀歌　詠歌大体　詠歌一体　三五記　井蛙抄　沙石集定家八代抄　八代集秀逸

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			題しらず

			Topic unknown

			大伴家持

			Otomo no Yakamochi

			春の<ruby>の<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>に　あさるき<ruby>ぎ<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>すの　つまごひに　をのがありかを　人にしれつ<ruby>つ<rt>ゝ</rt></ruby>

			* (Teika's note) 万

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			Other sources:
			* 万葉集 v8, １４５０. Prose preface 大伴宿祢家持春雉歌一首. Text: 春野尓（ハルノノニ）　安佐留雉乃（アサルキギスノ）　妻恋尓（ツマゴヒニ）　己我当乎（オノガアタリヲ）　人尓令知管（ヒトニシレツツ）
			* 赤人集１１６. Fifth line 人にしられつつ.
			* 金玉集　三十人集　三十六人集　深窓秘抄　定家八代抄
			* 能因歌枕　隆源口伝　袖中抄　色葉和難集

Jchristo at 18:36, 28 March 2022

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	:This grammatical structure guesses at the reason for some observation		:This grammatical structure guesses at the reason for some observation

	~~== Other sources ==~~		--

			Other sources:
	* 拾遺抄１		* 拾遺抄１
	* 古今和歌六帖４・春立つ日・ただみね		* 古今和歌六帖４・春立つ日・ただみね

Jchristo at 15:38, 4 June 2021

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	平<ruby>定文<rt>さだふん</rt></ruby>~~が家歌合によみ侍~~<ruby>り<rt>・</rt></ruby>ける		抄

			平<ruby>定文<rt>さだふん</rt></ruby>が家<ruby>の<rt>・</rt></ruby>歌合によみ侍<ruby>り<rt>・</rt></ruby>ける

			Read at Taira no Sadafun's Poetry Competition

	壬生忠岑		壬生忠岑

			Mibu no Tadamine

	はるたつと　いふ<ruby>ばかり<rt>許</rt></ruby>にや　三吉野<ruby>の<rt>ヽ</rt></ruby>　山もかすみて　けさは見ゆらん		はるたつと　いふ<ruby>ばかり<rt>許</rt></ruby>にや　三吉野<ruby>の<rt>ヽ</rt></ruby>　山もかすみて　けさは見ゆらん

			Is it just from saying (2) / "spring has come" (1) / That Holy Yoshino / Mountain, even, is wrapped in haze / how it looks this morning?

			;平定文が家の歌合
			:Held on 4/28/905. The rounds were mostly seasonal with a few love poems. A total of 40 poems were matched, 9 of which ended up in the SIS. Tadamine's poem was matched against [[Shuishu 1#8\|SIS 8]] by Mitsune; they tied.

			;や...らん
			:This grammatical structure guesses at the reason for some observation

	== Other sources ==		== Other sources ==

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