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Later poems

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	* 続拾遺和歌集４２　雨中柳といへる心を　鎌倉右大臣　青柳のいとよりつたふ白露を玉とみるまで春雨ぞふる		* 続拾遺和歌集４２　雨中柳といへる心を　鎌倉右大臣　青柳のいとよりつたふ白露を玉とみるまで春雨ぞふる
	* 続千載和歌集４４　前中納言定家　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる		* 続千載和歌集４４　前中納言定家　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる
	* 拾遺愚草２０６　朝みどり露ぬきみだる春雨にしたさへひかる玉柳かな　１９６８　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる　員外５１９　五一九あさみどり露の玉のをぬきもあへず柳のいとに春雨ぞふる		* 拾遺愚草２０６　朝みどり露ぬきみだる春雨にしたさへひかる玉柳かな　１９６８　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる　員外５１９　あさみどり露の玉のをぬきもあへず柳のいとに春雨ぞふる

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Later poems

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	新古今和歌集７５　青柳のいとに玉ぬくしらつゆのしらずいくよの春かへぬらむ		* 新古今和歌集７５　青柳のいとに玉ぬくしらつゆのしらずいくよの春かへぬらむ
	続拾遺和歌集４２　雨中柳といへる心を　鎌倉右大臣　青柳のいとよりつたふ白露を玉とみるまで春雨ぞふる		* 続拾遺和歌集４２　雨中柳といへる心を　鎌倉右大臣　青柳のいとよりつたふ白露を玉とみるまで春雨ぞふる
	続千載和歌集４４　前中納言定家　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる		* 続千載和歌集４４　前中納言定家　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる
	拾遺愚草２０６　朝みどり露ぬきみだる春雨にしたさへひかる玉柳かな　１９６８　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる　員外５１９　五一九あさみどり露の玉のをぬきもあへず柳のいとに春雨ぞふる		* 拾遺愚草２０６　朝みどり露ぬきみだる春雨にしたさへひかる玉柳かな　１９６８　あさみどり玉ぬきみだる青柳の枝もとををに春雨ぞふる　員外５１９　五一九あさみどり露の玉のをぬきもあへず柳のいとに春雨ぞふる







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 西大寺のほとりの柳をよめる
 僧正遍昭
 浅緑　糸よりかけて　白露を　珠にもぬける　春の柳か
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西大寺のほとりの柳をよめる

僧正遍昭

浅緑　糸よりかけて　白露を　珠にもぬける　春の柳か

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= Notes =

;西大寺
:A number of manuscripts, and the {{Teika|''Bishamon tendo chu''}} read this as にしのおほでら. It was one of the "Seven Great Temples" of Nara, established in 765.

;浅緑
:The light green color of the willow. There is some question over the grammatical relation of this word to the rest of the poem, but the majority reading seems the most natural, that this is the color of the "thread" (浅緑の糸).

;珠にもぬける春の柳か
:The image here is of the willow threading the dew as if they were beads with holes in them. The か is emphatic, and by {{Denju|Sogi}}'s time this was felt to be a no-longer-acceptable substitute for かな.
:A number of alternate texts read 珠にもぬくか　春のあをやぎ instead. The {{Nativist|''Seigi''}} prefers this version, positing that someone changed the last line to 柳か to avoid duplicating the mention of the color in the first line, and then had to change the fourth line to prevent the duplication of か. {{Modern|Kubota}} and Katagiri both agree that this is a likely theory; Kubota thinks the alternate reading sounds more in the style of the MYS.

= Analysis =

= Other sources =

* 古今和歌集・仮名序 (Used as an example of Henjo's poetry)
* 新撰和歌５９
* 遍昭集２. Preface にしでらのやなぎを
* 和歌一字抄　続歌仙落書
* 秀歌大体　桐火桶　歌林良材
* 源氏物語注・柏木

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