GSS 806 - Revision history

Jchristo at 18:46, 15 September 2025

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	葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる		葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる

			A mountain scarecrow is knocking, and in sorrow returns home alone, as the frogs are croaking.

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	;そほづ		;そほづ
	:A scarecrow that runs on water power, playing on the man knocking (八代集抄). See poem 268.		:A scarecrow that runs on water power, playing on the man knocking (八代集抄) - Nakayama disagrees with this although wrote quite a bit wondering if there was some validity to it. See poem 268.

	;かへる		;かへる
	:帰る and 蛙.		:帰る and 蛙. Used in association with the fields.

			= Analysis =

			The man compares himself to the lonely scarecrow. Perhaps he hears frogs croaking in the field. 鑑賞 praises the use of the unusual "plain" words そほづ and かへる, noting that in the GSS these kind of poems don't appear in a separate haikai section.

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Jchristo at 15:27, 10 September 2025

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	** ゐなかの家] ゐなかいへ（雲）		** ゐなかの家] ゐなかいへ（雲）
	** たたきけれども] たたきけれど（堀・雲）		** たたきけれども] たたきけれど（堀・雲）
	** ききつけず] ~~えききつけず（中）~~		** ききつけず] えききつけず（中・八・増）
	** かへる] かはず（安・承・正）		** かへる] かはず（安・承・正）
	** なきけるをききて] なきければ（堀）		** なきけるをききて] なきければ（堀）
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	;そほづ		;そほづ
	:A scarecrow that runs on water power, playing on the man knocking (八代集抄).		:A scarecrow that runs on water power, playing on the man knocking (八代集抄). See poem 268.

	;かへる		;かへる

Jchristo at 15:24, 10 September 2025

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	* Preface		* Preface
	** いひつかはしける] ~~いひかはしける（鳥・貞・坊）、いひける（慶）~~		** いひつかはしける] いひかはしける（鳥・貞・坊）、いひける（慶）Norinaga supported the いひかはしける reading.
	** 女の] 人の（堀）、人（雲）		** 女の] 人の（堀）、人（雲）
	** ゐなかの家] ゐなかいへ（雲）		** ゐなかの家] ゐなかいへ（雲）
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	* Poem		* Poem
	** そほづ] そうづ（堀）		** そほづ] そうづ（堀）
	** ねをぞなきぬる] ねをぞなきける（堀*~~・坊）、ねこそなかるれ（雲・慶）、ねをのみぞなく（鳥・正ィ・六華）~~ (安 has something here but I cannot make it out)		** ねをぞなきぬる] ねをぞなきける（堀*・坊）、ねこそなかるれ（雲・慶）、ねをのみぞなく（鳥・正ィ・増ィ・六華） (安 has something here but I cannot make it out)

	= Other sources =		= Other sources =

	* 六華集２８７　六花注（かはづのことなり。催馬楽の歌なり。かなきかへると云ふ歌あるなり)		* 六華集２８７　六花注（かはづのことなり。催馬楽の歌なり。かなきかへると云ふ歌あるなり)

			= Notes =

			;そほづ
			:A scarecrow that runs on water power, playing on the man knocking (八代集抄).

			;かへる
			:帰る and 蛙.

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	<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて		<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて

	A man who had been interacting with a woman visited her house in the countryside and knocked at her gate, but perhaps because she didn't hear, the door was not opened, and he heard a frog croak in the nearby field.		A man who had been interacting with a woman visited her house in the countryside and knocked at her gate, but perhaps because she didn't hear, the door was not opened, and he heard a frog croak in the nearby field.

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	<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、　たゝきけれども、　きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて		<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて

	A man who had been interacting with a woman visited her house in the countryside and knocked at her gate, but perhaps because she didn't hear, the door was not opened, and he heard a frog croak in the nearby field.		A man who had been interacting with a woman visited her house in the countryside and knocked at her gate, but perhaps because she didn't hear, the door was not opened, and he heard a frog croak in the nearby field.

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	<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて		<div class="honmon">

			<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、　たゝきけれども、　きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて

	A man who had been interacting with a woman visited her house in the countryside and knocked at her gate, but perhaps because she didn't hear, the door was not opened, and he heard a frog croak in the nearby field.		A man who had been interacting with a woman visited her house in the countryside and knocked at her gate, but perhaps because she didn't hear, the door was not opened, and he heard a frog croak in the nearby field.

	葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる		葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる

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	<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて		<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて
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	葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる		葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる

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	<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて		<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて

			A man who had been interacting with a woman visited her house in the countryside and knocked at her gate, but perhaps because she didn't hear, the door was not opened, and he heard a frog croak in the nearby field.

	葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる		葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる

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	<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて		<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて

	葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる		葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる

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	<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて		<ruby>を</rt>お</rt>とこの、物などいひつかはしける女のゐなかの家にまかりて、たゝきけれども、きゝつけずやありけん、かどもあけずなりにければ、田のほとりにかへるのなきけるをきゝて

	葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる		葦引の　山田のそほづ　うちわびて　ひとりかへるの　ねをぞなきぬる

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