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Textual Variants

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	* あだに見え] あだめきて（安・堀・雲・慶）、あだにのみ（坊）		* あだに見え] あだめきて（安・堀・雲・慶）、あだにのみ（坊）
	* 見え侍りける] 見えける（中*）		* 見え侍りける] 見えける（中*・増ィ）
	* おとこ] 人（堀）		* おとこ] 人（堀）
	* たちいでて] たちいでば（雲）、うちいでて（安）		* たちいでて] たちいでば（雲）、うちいでて（安）

Jchristo at 17:28, 8 August 2025

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	あだに見え侍ける<ruby>お<rt>を</rt></ruby>とこに		あだに見え侍ける<ruby>お<rt>を</rt></ruby>とこに

			To a man who had shown his lack of seriousness

	よみ人しらず		よみ人しらず

	~~こりずまの浦の白浪立いでゝ　よるほどもなく　かへる許か~~		Poet unknown

			こりずまの　浦の白浪　立いでゝ　よるほどもなく　かへる許か

			The white waves of Suma bay stand and come in, and hardly having shown up they immediately retreat.

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	= Notes =		= Notes =

			;こりずまのうら
			:This is a play on the location 須磨の浦 as well as 懲りず.

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

	~~「あだなる人の、立よると見しほどもなく帰りて、又来がたきを恨む心也」（八代集抄）~~		The basic imagery of the poem is fairly clear -- the coming and retreating waves are used as a metaphor for the man coming and going, and not staying very long. Exactly what the poem is meant to convey to the man is harder to say, however. We should probably assume a context where the poet visits the woman and then just goes home (possibly multiple times).「あだなる人の、立よると見しほどもなく帰りて、又来がたきを恨む心也」（八代集抄）Kifune's interpretation is that the woman sends the man home because she sees through his cheating, but he keeps coming back. Kudo adds that the man isn't really putting in much effort.

	~~同じくあだにみえ侍りける男に、こりずまの浦のしら浪立出でて~~
	~~みるほどもなく帰るばかりぞ、と有る歌の返しの心を~~
	~~一一六五すまの浦の松の嵐のはやければよどみもやらでかへるなみかな~~

			This poem is linked to the previous ones through the marine imagery and associated words. Katagiri suggests reading this as a response to the previous two poems.

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Jchristo at 15:40, 8 August 2025

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	* 五大歌枕（すまの浦）　歌枕名寄（すま・浦）		* 五大歌枕（すまの浦）　歌枕名寄（すま・浦）

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			= Analysis =

			「あだなる人の、立よると見しほどもなく帰りて、又来がたきを恨む心也」（八代集抄）

	同じくあだにみえ侍りける男に、こりずまの浦のしら浪立出でて		同じくあだにみえ侍りける男に、こりずまの浦のしら浪立出でて

Jchristo at 14:45, 8 August 2025

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-あだに見え侍りけるをとこに　よみ人しらず
+あだに見え侍ける<ruby>お<rt>を</rt></ruby>とこに
-八〇〇|八〇一こりずまの浦の白浪立ちいでてよるほどもなくかへるばかりか
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