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Jchristo at 14:33, 8 August 2025

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Jchristo at 14:32, 8 August 2025

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	= Textual Variants =		= Textual Variants =

	* ~~返ごと~~] ~~かへし（雲）~~		* 返ごとも] かへしも（雲）、返事（八・増*）
	* 又かさねて] かさねて（堀・雲・坊・承・正）		* 又かさねて] かさねて（堀・雲・坊・承・正）
	* いそ] はま（安・堀・雲・承・正・正保ィ・八*・旧国ィ・六帖）		* いそ] はま（安・堀・雲・承・正・正保ィ・八・増・旧国ィ・六帖）
	* かへるがへる] かへすがへす（雲・慶・新ィ・六帖・家集）		* かへるがへる] かへすがへす（雲・慶・新ィ・六帖・家集）

Jchristo at 14:26, 7 August 2025

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	返ごとも侍ざりければ、又かさねてつかはしける		返ごとも侍ざりければ、又かさねてつかはしける

			There was no answer, so again he sent this.

	[ [[紀友則]] ]		[ [[紀友則]] ]

			[Ki no Tomonori]

	見るもなく　めもなき海の　いそにいでゝ　かへる＼／"も　怨つるかな		見るもなく　めもなき海の　いそにいでゝ　かへる＼／"も　怨つるかな

			I go into the rocky beach with no seaweed, and again and again look at the bay. (I go to your house where you do not look at my letters nor do I have any chance of meeting you, and again again I return with a grudge.)

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	* 返ごと] かへし（雲）		* 返ごと] かへし（雲）
	* 又かさねて] かさねて（堀・雲・坊・承・正）		* 又かさねて] かさねて（堀・雲・坊・承・正）
	* いそ] ~~はま（安・堀・雲・承・正・正保ィ・旧国ィ・六帖）~~		* いそ] はま（安・堀・雲・承・正・正保ィ・八*・旧国ィ・六帖）
			* かへるがへる] かへすがへす（雲・慶・新ィ・六帖・家集）

	= Other Sources =		= Other Sources =

	* ~~古今和歌六帖２１１２・恨み・とものり（ある本）~~. Second line めもなくうらも. Third line はまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.		* [[古今和歌六帖]]２１１２・恨み・とものり（ある本）. Second line めもなくうらも. Third line はまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.
	* ~~友則集３７~~. Prose preface かへりごとのなければ、また. Third line しまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.		* [[友則集]]３７. Prose preface かへりごとのなければ、また. Third line しまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.

			= Notes =

			;見るのなく
			:The woman won't look at his letters, and there is no seaweed(海松) in the sea.

			;めもなき
			:A play on 海布（め）, another kind of seaweed, and 目. 「(私を見るあなたの)目」（新大系）「逢う機会もない」（全釈）

			;海
			:A play on 憂み.

			;かへるがへる
			:"Over and over", but also 帰る.「波の詞にかへると云事あれば、それにひびかせられたるにても有るべし」（新抄）

			;怨み
			:Also 浦見.

			= Analysis =

			This poem is similar to the last one; Tomonori again uses seaside imagery. This time there is a dense web of (common) wordplays and associated words involving the ocean.

			See [[GSS 1022]] and [[GSS 1049]].

	[[GSS 798\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 800\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 798\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 800\|Next poem]]

Jchristo: /* Other Sources */

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Other Sources

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	= Other Sources =		= Other Sources =

	* 古今和歌六帖２１１２・恨み・とものり（ある本）. Third line はまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.		* 古今和歌六帖２１１２・恨み・とものり（ある本）. Second line めもなくうらも. Third line はまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.
	* 友則集３７. Prose preface かへりごとのなければ、また. Third line しまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.		* 友則集３７. Prose preface かへりごとのなければ、また. Third line しまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.

Jchristo at 14:11, 7 August 2025

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	* 返ごと] かへし（雲）		* 返ごと] かへし（雲）
	* 又かさねて] かさねて（堀・雲・坊・承・正）		* 又かさねて] かさねて（堀・雲・坊・承・正）
	* いそ] ~~はま（安・堀・雲・承・正・正保ィ・旧国ィ）~~		* いそ] はま（安・堀・雲・承・正・正保ィ・旧国ィ・六帖）

			= Other Sources =

			* 古今和歌六帖２１１２・恨み・とものり（ある本）. Third line はまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.
			* 友則集３７. Prose preface かへりごとのなければ、また. Third line しまにいでて. Fourth line かへすがへすも.

	[[GSS 798\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 800\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 798\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 800\|Next poem]]

Jchristo at 14:08, 7 August 2025

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	[ [[紀友則]] ]		[ [[紀友則]] ]

	~~みるもなく　めもなき海のいそにいでてかへるがへるも怨みつるかな~~		見るもなく　めもなき海の　いそにいでゝ　かへる＼／"も　怨つるかな

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			= Textual Variants =

			* 返ごと] かへし（雲）
			* 又かさねて] かさねて（堀・雲・坊・承・正）
			* いそ] はま（安・堀・雲・承・正・正保ィ・旧国ィ）

	[[GSS 798\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 800\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 798\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 800\|Next poem]]

Jchristo at 13:59, 7 August 2025

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	[[[紀友則]]]		[ [[紀友則]] ]

	みるもなく　めもなき海のいそにいでてかへるがへるも怨みつるかな		みるもなく　めもなき海のいそにいでてかへるがへるも怨みつるかな

Jchristo at 13:58, 7 August 2025

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	き		[[[紀友則]]]

	みるもなく　めもなき海のいそにいでてかへるがへるも怨みつるかな		みるもなく　めもなき海のいそにいでてかへるがへるも怨みつるかな

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	~~返ごとｆも侍らざりければ、又かさねてつかはしける~~		返ごとも侍ざりければ、又かさねてつかはしける
	~~七九九\|八〇〇みるもなくめもなき海のいそにいでてかへるがへるも怨みつるかな~~
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			みるもなく　めもなき海のいそにいでてかへるがへるも怨みつるかな

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