GSS 795 - Revision history

Jchristo at 13:48, 4 August 2025

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	女につかはしける		(98v) 女につかはしける

	Sent to a woman		Sent to a woman

Jchristo at 13:47, 4 August 2025

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			[[GSS 794\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 796\|Next poem]]

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	There is no clear reason for the rain imagery -- perhaps it was sent on a rainy day or the couple's last meeting was during a rainstorm. The alternate reading of 雲居はるかに complements the wide, open feeling of あまの原.		There is no clear reason for the rain imagery -- perhaps it was sent on a rainy day or the couple's last meeting was during a rainstorm. The alternate reading of 雲居はるかに complements the wide, open feeling of あまの原.

			[[GSS 794\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_12\|Volume 12 Contents]] \| [[GSS 796\|Next poem]]

	[[Category:Love]]		[[Category:Love]]

Jchristo: /* Analysis */

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Analysis

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Jchristo at 18:17, 1 August 2025

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	;かぞへば		;かぞへば
	:「俗言に数ヘタナラバといふ意也。さて、この詞は、結句へかかりて、結句の下に「ならん」と云詞を添へて心得べきなり」（新抄）		:This introduces a "If...then" structure, with the final "then" implied.「俗言に数ヘタナラバといふ意也。さて、この詞は、結句へかかりて、結句の下に「ならん」と云詞を添へて心得べきなり」（新抄）

			;あまの原
			:This metaphor for the sky plays up its vastness.

	;くもりふたがり		;くもりふたがり
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	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

	See [[GSS 631]],[[GSS 643]], also 兼盛集２９　君を思ふ数にしとらばをやみなくふりそふあめのあしはものかは and from the 古今和歌集序「我が恋はよむともつきじありそ海の真砂はよみ尽くすとも」		The poem is simple and direct in its expression, and the idea of "counting" love is found in a number of other poems. See [[GSS 631]],[[GSS 643]], also 兼盛集２９　君を思ふ数にしとらばをやみなくふりそふあめのあしはものかは and from the 古今和歌集序「我が恋はよむともつきじありそ海の真砂はよみ尽くすとも」

			There is no clear reason for the rain imagery -- perhaps it was sent on a rainy day or the couple's last meeting was during a rainstorm. The alternate reading of 雲居はるかに complements the wide, open feeling of あまの原.

			[[Category:Love]]
			[[Category:Personal]]

Jchristo at 17:43, 1 August 2025

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	* 女に] ~~女のもとに（中・行・雲・坊・正保・旧国）~~		* 女に] 女のもとに（中・行・雲・坊・正保・標・新・旧国・全釈）
	* 敏行朝臣] ~~藤原敏行朝臣（中・雲・坊・承・正）~~(坊 has furigana on 敏 of ノリ)		* 敏行朝臣] 藤原敏行朝臣（中・雲・慶・坊・承・正）(坊 has furigana on 敏 of ノリ)
	* わが恋の] 我が恋は（堀*）		* わが恋の] 我が恋は（堀*）
	* かぞへば] かずへば（承・正）		* かぞへば] かずへば（承・正）
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			;かぞへば
			:「俗言に数ヘタナラバといふ意也。さて、この詞は、結句へかかりて、結句の下に「ならん」と云詞を添へて心得べきなり」（新抄）

			;くもりふたがり
			:「雲おほふ心也」（八代集抄）

			;ふる雨のごと
			:「ふる雨のごとは、降る雨の如くなり」（新抄）

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

			See [[GSS 631]],[[GSS 643]], also 兼盛集２９　君を思ふ数にしとらばをやみなくふりそふあめのあしはものかは and from the 古今和歌集序「我が恋はよむともつきじありそ海の真砂はよみ尽くすとも」

Jchristo at 17:29, 1 August 2025

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	[[敏行朝臣~~\|藤原敏行~~]]		[[藤原敏行\|敏行朝臣]]

	Lord Toshiyuki		Lord Toshiyuki
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	* [[敏行集~~\|藤原敏行~~]]１７. Prose preface をむなのもとにつかはす. Fourth line くもゐはるかに.		* [[藤原敏行\|敏行集]]１７. Prose preface をむなのもとにつかはす. Fourth line くもゐはるかに.

	= Notes =		= Notes =

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

Jchristo at 17:29, 1 August 2025

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			Sent to a woman

	[[敏行朝臣\|藤原敏行]]		[[敏行朝臣\|藤原敏行]]

			Lord Toshiyuki

	わが恋の　かずをかぞへば　あまの原　くもりふたがり　ふる雨のごと		わが恋の　かずをかぞへば　あまの原　くもりふたがり　ふる雨のごと

			If I were to count my love, it would be like the rain falling from the sky blocked by clouds.

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	* [[敏行集\|藤原敏行]]１７. Prose preface をむなのもとにつかはす. Fourth line くもゐはるかに.		* [[敏行集\|藤原敏行]]１７. Prose preface をむなのもとにつかはす. Fourth line くもゐはるかに.

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			= Analysis =

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女につかはしける　

[[敏行朝臣|藤原敏行]]

わが恋の　かずをかぞへば　あまの原　くもりふたがり　ふる雨のごと

= Textual Variants =

* 女に] 女のもとに（中・行・雲・坊・正保・旧国）
* 敏行朝臣] 藤原敏行朝臣（中・雲・坊・承・正）(坊 has furigana on 敏 of ノリ)
* わが恋の] 我が恋は（堀*）
* かぞへば] かずへば（承・正）

= Other Sources =

* [[敏行集|藤原敏行]]１７. Prose preface をむなのもとにつかはす. Fourth line くもゐはるかに.