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Analysis

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	「人しれず一人のみ恋れば苦しきにいひ出んとの心なり」（八代集抄）新抄 offers three readings: (1) I want you to hear my voice just like the bird, (2) I want you to respond to me the way the bird does, (3) I am calling (よぶ) for you, concludes with 猶はじめの説の方やおだやかならん.		「人しれず一人のみ恋れば苦しきにいひ出んとの心なり」（八代集抄）新抄 offers three readings: (1) I want you to hear my voice just like the bird, (2) I want you to respond to me the way the bird does, (3) I am calling (よぶ) for you, concludes with 猶はじめの説の方やおだやかならん. Most commenters go with (1), Katagiri supports (3).

	Kifune's conjecture is that this is a woman in palace service that is too stuck up or cold to the poet.		Kifune's conjecture is that this is a woman in palace service that is too stuck up or cold to the poet.

Jchristo at 16:01, 21 November 2024

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	There was someone he had feelings for, but he had no way ~~of communicating them,~~ and she showed coldness to him, so he sent this		There was someone he had feelings for, but he had no way to communicate with her and she showed coldness to him, so he sent this

	It is hard to be the only one longing. I would like to show you the cry coming forth from the ''yobukodori.''		It is hard to be the only one longing. I would like to show you the cry coming forth from the ''yobukodori.''
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	[[清原深養父\|深養父集]]５５．Second line おもへばくるし. Fourth line 声になきつつ.		[[清原深養父\|深養父集]]５５．Second line おもへばくるし. Fourth line 声になきつつ.

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			「人しれず一人のみ恋れば苦しきにいひ出んとの心なり」（八代集抄）新抄 offers three readings: (1) I want you to hear my voice just like the bird, (2) I want you to respond to me the way the bird does, (3) I am calling (よぶ) for you, concludes with 猶はじめの説の方やおだやかならん.

			Kifune's conjecture is that this is a woman in palace service that is too stuck up or cold to the poet.

			[[SIS 643]] 山彦も答へぬ山の呼子鳥我ひとりのみなきや渡らむ

			[[KKS ]] 下にのみ恋ふれば苦し玉のをのたえて乱れん人なとがめそ

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Jchristo at 15:49, 21 November 2024

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			There was someone he had feelings for, but he had no way of communicating them, and she showed coldness to him, so he sent this

			It is hard to be the only one longing. I would like to show you the cry coming forth from the ''yobukodori.''

			= Textual notes =

			= Other sources =

			[[清原深養父\|深養父集]]５５．Second line おもへばくるし. Fourth line 声になきつつ.



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Jchristo at 15:45, 21 November 2024

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	心かけて<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けれど、いひつかむ方もなく、つれなきさまの見えければ、つかはしける		心かけて<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けれど、いひつかむ方もなく、つれなきさまの見えければ、つかはしける

	ひとりのみ　<ruby>こふ<rt>恋</rt></ruby>ればくるし　<ruby>よぶこどり<rt>呼子鳥</rt></ruby>　こゑになきいでて　君にきかせん		ひとりのみ　<ruby>こふ<rt>恋</rt></ruby>ればくるし　<ruby>よぶこどり<rt>呼子鳥</rt></ruby>　こゑになきいでて　君にきかせん

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