GSS 684 - Revision history

Jchristo at 17:28, 4 September 2024

2024-09-04T17:28:27Z

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	= Translation =		= Translation =

			Someone said "It is unlucky to say that the moon is affecting."

			Poet unknown

			While in sadness from sleeping alone, I wake up and stand repeatedly, and I cannot think that saying the moon is affecting is unlucky.

	= Textual Notes =		= Textual Notes =
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	* 月をあはれ] 月をうつくしみあはれ（雲）		* 月をあはれ] 月をうつくしみあはれ（雲）
	* いむなり] いむぞ（荒）		* いむなり] いむぞ（荒）
	* といふ人の] ~~と人の（中）、と申す人の（堀・雲）、と申す人（荒・片）~~		* といふ人の] と人の（中）、と申す人の（堀・雲・標ィ・新ィ）、と申す人（荒・片）
	* ありければ] 侍りければ（堀）		* ありければ] 侍りければ（堀）
			* よみ人しらず] 小町（慶・新ィ）
	* ままに] ときは（堀・雲）		* ままに] ときは（堀・雲）
	* かねつる] わびぬる（堀）、かねつる（安ィ）		* かねつる] わびぬる（堀）、かねつる（安ィ）
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	* [[定家八代抄]]		* [[定家八代抄]]

			= Notes =

	~~= Notes =~~		;月をあはれといふいむなり
			:This might be related to looking at the moon shortening your life (九代). There are other examples of this in ''Genji,'' in Bai Juyi's poetry, and in waka (八代), also in Taketori (標注).　The なり is 伝聞.

			;かねつる
			:I cannot avoid (or I forget) the unluckiness of looking at the moon.

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

			The woman is staring at the moon in sadness throughout the night, and can do nothing about it (九代). SIS 1195 (増抄). KKS 大方は月をもめでじ...

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Jchristo at 20:11, 3 September 2024

2024-09-03T20:11:09Z

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			「月をあはれといふはいむなり」といふ人のありければ

			よみ人しらず

			ひとりねの　わびしきまゝに　おきゐつゝ　月をあはれと　いみぞかねつる

	= Translation =		= Translation =

	= Textual Notes =		= Textual Notes =

			* 月をあはれ] 月をうつくしみあはれ（雲）
			* いむなり] いむぞ（荒）
			* といふ人の] と人の（中）、と申す人の（堀・雲）、と申す人（荒・片）
			* ありければ] 侍りければ（堀）
			* ままに] ときは（堀・雲）
			* かねつる] わびぬる（堀）、かねつる（安ィ）

	= Other Sources =		= Other Sources =

			* [[小町集]]３６. Prose preface 中たえたるをとこの、しのびてきてかくれて見けるに、月のいとあはれなるを見て、ねんことこそいとくちをしけれとすのこにながむれば、をとこいむなる物をといへば
			* [[定家八代抄]]


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