GSS 683 - Revision history

Jchristo at 15:11, 6 September 2024

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	KKS 1093: 君をおきてあだし心をわがもたばすゑの松山浪もこえなん. Although in this poem the waves are crossing (新抄).		KKS 1093: 君をおきてあだし心をわがもたばすゑの松山浪もこえなん. Although in this poem the waves are crossing (新抄).

			「男にあざむかれて、その約束の違うことを怨んだ歌である。...句切った上句に強い感情がこめられている」（鑑賞）

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Jchristo at 20:31, 29 August 2024

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	= Notes =		= Notes =

			;名に立つ
			:This also refers to the rumor of his broken pledge, but also leads to Sue no Matsuyama (新抄). The 末 also means あげく (全釈).

			;そら
			:This also refers to the man's words being 空言 (新注).

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

	This represents the soaking tears on the sleeve (八).		This represents the soaking tears on the sleeve (八). This is because the man's heart has changed, and she cries all the time (新抄).

	KKS 1093: 君をおきてあだし心をわがもたばすゑの松山浪もこえなん		KKS 1093: 君をおきてあだし心をわがもたばすゑの松山浪もこえなん. Although in this poem the waves are crossing (新抄).

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Jchristo at 20:35, 26 August 2024

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	* もとに] もとへ（荒・片）		* もとに] もとへ（荒・片）
	* わが袖] わかりて（片）		* わが袖] わかりて（片）
	* そらより] うらより（荒・片・安*~~・雲・坊・正保ィ・旧国ィ）~~		* そらより] うらより（荒・片・安*・雲・坊・正保ィ・増ィ・標ィ・新ィ・旧国ィ）Norinaga thought the そら reading was better.
	* こえぬ] こひぬ（正#)		* こえぬ] こひぬ（正#)
	* 日はなし] 日もなし（貞）		* 日はなし] 日もなし（貞）
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	* [[五代歌枕]] [[歌枕名寄]] (both read うら)		* [[五代歌枕]] [[歌枕名寄]] (both read うら)
	* 源氏注・末摘花		* 源氏注・末摘花


	= Notes =		= Notes =

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

			This represents the soaking tears on the sleeve (八).

			KKS 1093: 君をおきてあだし心をわがもたばすゑの松山浪もこえなん

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Jchristo at 20:26, 26 August 2024

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	= Other Sources =		= Other Sources =

			* [[五代歌枕]] [[歌枕名寄]] (both read うら)
			* 源氏注・末摘花


	= Notes =		= Notes =

Jchristo at 20:23, 26 August 2024

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	= Translation =		= Translation =

			Sent to a man

			Tosa

			Are my sleeves the famous Sue no Matsuyama? There is no day where waves from the sky don't cross me.

	= Textual Notes =		= Textual Notes =
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	* もとに] もとへ（荒・片）		* もとに] もとへ（荒・片）
	* わが袖] わかりて（片）		* わが袖] わかりて（片）
	* そらより] うらより（荒・片・安*~~・雲・坊・正保ィ）~~		* そらより] うらより（荒・片・安*・雲・坊・正保ィ・旧国ィ）
	* こえぬ] こひぬ（正#)		* こえぬ] こひぬ（正#)
	* 日はなし] 日もなし（貞）		* 日はなし] 日もなし（貞）

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