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Textual Notes

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	** まかりかへりて] かへりて（堀）、まかりさりて（荒・片・安）		** まかりかへりて] かへりて（堀）、まかりさりて（荒・片・安）
	* Poem		* Poem
	** 暁と] 暁を（中・堀・片*~~・雲・坊・八ィ・新ィ・生保版本ィ）~~		** 暁と] 暁を（中・堀・片*・雲・坊・八ィ・新ィ・正保版本ィ）
	** わびしかりけれ] かなしかりけれ（安*）		** わびしかりけれ] かなしかりけれ（安*）

Jchristo: /* Analysis */

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Analysis

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	[[Category:Love]]		[[Category:Love]]
	[[Category:Personal ~~poem~~]]		[[Category:Personal Poem]]

Jchristo at 18:49, 11 August 2023

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	He was chatting with someone he met in secret, and people were making a commotion, so he returned home and sent this		He was chatting with someone he met in secret, and people were making a commotion, so he returned home and sent this

	Tsurayuki		[[紀貫之\|Tsurayuki]]

	Why do they talk about the dawn? When we have parted it is the evening when I suffer.		Why do they talk about the dawn? When we have parted it is the evening when I suffer.
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	::有明のつれなく見えし別より暁ばかりうき物はなし		::有明のつれなく見えし別より暁ばかりうき物はなし
	::~~There~~ is ~~nothing more painful than~~ the dawn after ~~a cold parting~~.		::Nothing is as sorrowful as the ruthless dawn, moon still in the sky, after you've parted from your love.

	See also [[GSS 510]], [[GSS 511]].		See also [[GSS 510]], [[GSS 511]].

Jchristo at 18:48, 11 August 2023

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	<ruby>しのび<rt>忍</rt></ruby>たりける人に<ruby>ものがたり<rt>物語</rt></ruby>し<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けるを、人の<ruby>さは<rt>騒</rt></ruby>がしく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ、まかり<ruby>かへ<rt>帰</rt></ruby>りてつかはしける		<ruby>しのび<rt>忍</rt></ruby>たりける人に<ruby>ものがたり<rt>物語</rt></ruby>し<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けるを、人の<ruby>さは<rt>騒(さわ)</rt></ruby>がしく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ、まかり<ruby>かへ<rt>帰</rt></ruby>りてつかはしける

	つらゆき		つらゆき
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	** ものがたりし侍けるを] ものいひし侍りけるを（荒・片）、ものがたりをし侍けるを（雲・慶）、ものがたりしけるを（胡）、ものがたりし侍るを（坊）		** ものがたりし侍けるを] ものいひし侍りけるを（荒・片）、ものがたりをし侍けるを（雲・慶）、ものがたりしけるを（胡）、ものがたりし侍るを（坊）
	** 人の] 人めの（中）、人め（荒・片・堀・雲・慶・坊・胡・承・正）		** 人の] 人めの（中）、人め（荒・片・堀・雲・慶・坊・胡・承・正）
	** さはがしく侍ければ] ~~さわがしくなりければ（中・承・正）、さはがしかりければ（堀・雲・胡）、さはがし侍りければ（慶）~~		** さはがしく侍ければ] さわがしくなりければ（中・承・正・八ィ・新ィ）、さはがしかりければ（堀・雲・胡）、さはがし侍りければ（慶）
	** まかりかへりて] かへりて（堀）、まかりさりて（荒・片・安）		** まかりかへりて] かへりて（堀）、まかりさりて（荒・片・安）
	* Poem		* Poem
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	= Notes =		= Notes =

	;暁		;ものがたりし
	:あかつき（諸本）		:Although sometimes this can be a euphemism for sex, here it is probably intended to be literal "chatting", although chatting that will lead to a sexual encounter. But Tsurayuki has to leave before they can actually do anything more.

			;人さはがしく
			:A possible interpretation is that the woman is in palace service, a place that has little privacy for secret love encounters of this type.

			;暁と
			:あかつき（諸本）. People generally say that the dawn when they have to part is the sad time. With the alternate reading of を, it may recall criticism of the dawn found in poems like [[KKS 625]] (新抄).

			;夜ゐ
			:This seems to be Teika's preferred spelling of the word; the normal "historical" spelling is よひ. This refers to the first part of the night.

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

			Tsurayuki's intent here is to build off the common "parting" poetry where the man laments the hated dawn that forces him to separate from his lover. This time he has had to return as soon as the sun set, and this becomes the part of the night he hates.

			Possibly the poem was influenced by [[KKS 625]]:

			::有明のつれなく見えし別より暁ばかりうき物はなし
			::There is nothing more painful than the dawn after a cold parting.

			See also [[GSS 510]], [[GSS 511]].

	[[GSS 507\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_9\|Volume 9 Contents]] \| [[GSS 509\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 507\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_9\|Volume 9 Contents]] \| [[GSS 509\|Next poem]]

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Other Sources

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	* [[古今和歌六帖]]２８００・よひのま・つらゆき. First line あかつきを. Second line なにしいひけむ.		* [[古今和歌六帖]]２８００・よひのま・つらゆき. First line あかつきを. Second line なにしいひけむ.
			* 貫之集（西本願寺本）５１９ (according to 新注)

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Jchristo: /* Other Sources */

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Other Sources

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	= Other Sources =		= Other Sources =

	* ~~古今和歌六帖２８００・よひのま・つらゆき~~. First line あかつきを. Second line なにしいひけむ.		* [[古今和歌六帖]]２８００・よひのま・つらゆき. First line あかつきを. Second line なにしいひけむ.

	= Notes =		= Notes =

Jchristo: /* Other Sources */

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Other Sources

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	= Other Sources =		= Other Sources =

			* 古今和歌六帖２８００・よひのま・つらゆき. First line あかつきを. Second line なにしいひけむ.

	= Notes =		= Notes =

Jchristo: /* Text */

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Text

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	<ruby>しのび<rt>忍</rt></ruby>たりける人に<ruby>ものがたり<rt>物語</rt></ruby>し<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けるを、人の<ruby>さは<rt>騒</rt></ruby>がしく<ruby<侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ、まかり<ruby>かへ<rt>帰</rt></ruby>りてつかはしける		<ruby>しのび<rt>忍</rt></ruby>たりける人に<ruby>ものがたり<rt>物語</rt></ruby>し<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けるを、人の<ruby>さは<rt>騒</rt></ruby>がしく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ、まかり<ruby>かへ<rt>帰</rt></ruby>りてつかはしける

	つらゆき		つらゆき

Jchristo at 17:28, 11 August 2023

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			= Translation =

			He was chatting with someone he met in secret, and people were making a commotion, so he returned home and sent this

			Tsurayuki

			Why do they talk about the dawn? When we have parted it is the evening when I suffer.

			= Textual Notes =

			* Preface
			** しのびたりける] しのびたる（中・堀・雲・胡・慶・坊・承・正）
			** ものがたりし侍けるを] ものいひし侍りけるを（荒・片）、ものがたりをし侍けるを（雲・慶）、ものがたりしけるを（胡）、ものがたりし侍るを（坊）
			** 人の] 人めの（中）、人め（荒・片・堀・雲・慶・坊・胡・承・正）
			** さはがしく侍ければ] さわがしくなりければ（中・承・正）、さはがしかりければ（堀・雲・胡）、さはがし侍りければ（慶）
			** まかりかへりて] かへりて（堀）、まかりさりて（荒・片・安）
			* Poem
			** 暁と] 暁を（中・堀・片*・雲・坊・八ィ・新ィ・生保版本ィ）
			** わびしかりけれ] かなしかりけれ（安*）

			= Other Sources =

			= Notes =

			;暁
			:あかつき（諸本）

			= Analysis =

	[[GSS 507\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_9\|Volume 9 Contents]] \| [[GSS 509\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 507\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_9\|Volume 9 Contents]] \| [[GSS 509\|Next poem]]

Jchristo: /* Text */

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Text

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	<ruby>しのび<rt>忍</rt></ruby>たりける人に<ruby>ものがたり<rt>物語</rt></ruby>し<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けるを、人の<ruby>さは<rt>騒</rt></ruby>がしく<ruby<侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ、まかり<ruby>かへ<rt>帰</rt></ruby>りてつかはしける		<ruby>しのび<rt>忍</rt></ruby>たりける人に<ruby>ものがたり<rt>物語</rt></ruby>し<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>けるを、人の<ruby>さは<rt>騒</rt></ruby>がしく<ruby<侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ、まかり<ruby>かへ<rt>帰</rt></ruby>りてつかはしける
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	暁と　何かいひけむ　わかるれば　<ruby>夜ゐ<rt>宵</rt></ruby>もいとこそ　わびしかりけれ		暁と　何かいひけむ　わかるれば　<ruby>夜ゐ<rt>宵</rt></ruby>もいとこそ　わびしかりけれ

			</div>

	[[GSS 507\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_9\|Volume 9 Contents]] \| [[GSS 509\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 507\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_9\|Volume 9 Contents]] \| [[GSS 509\|Next poem]]