GSS 507 - Revision history

Jchristo at 17:23, 11 August 2023

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	= Textual Notes =		= Textual Notes =

	* あひしりて] あひそめて（荒・片）、あひて（坊・胡）		* Preface
	* ひとに] ひとの（荒・片）		** あひしりて] あひそめて（荒・片）、あひて（坊・胡）
	* あひがたく] 又あひがたく (行・中・貞・堀・雲・坊・承・正・正版・八・増・標・新・旧大観・評・全), 又えあはず（荒）,又もえあはず（片）、又のひがたく（胡）. Given the overwhelming manuscript support for this reading, even in Teika's own texts, it may seem that its omission in the base text is a mistake. However, in the base text Teika writes 又 in red ink indicating the reading was in the Fujiwara no Yukinari manuscript, suggesting that the omission was intentional, for whatever reason. Kifune is the only modern editor to emend the text, perhaps because the addition of 又 may be more specific but does not really alter the meaning (Kifune does not give this emendation in his 校訂付記 at the end of the book).		** ひとに] ひとの（荒・片）
			** あひがたく] 又あひがたく (行・中・貞・堀・雲・坊・承・正・正版・八・増・標・新・旧大観・評・全), 又えあはず（荒）,又もえあはず（片）、又のひがたく（胡）. Given the overwhelming manuscript support for this reading, even in Teika's own texts, it may seem that its omission in the base text is a mistake. However, in the base text Teika writes 又 in red ink indicating the reading was in the Fujiwara no Yukinari manuscript, suggesting that the omission was intentional, for whatever reason. Kifune is the only modern editor to emend the text, perhaps because the addition of 又 may be more specific but does not really alter the meaning (Kifune does not give this emendation in his 校訂付記 at the end of the book).
	* あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)		* あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)
	* わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）		* わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）

Jchristo: /* Analysis */

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Analysis

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	[[Category:Love]]		[[Category:Love]]
			[[Category:Personal Poem]]

Jchristo at 15:55, 11 August 2023

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	からうして<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>しりて<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ける<ruby>ひと<rt>人</rt></ruby>につゝむことありて、<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>がたく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ		からうして<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>しりて<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ける<ruby>ひと<rt>人</rt></ruby>につゝむことありて、<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>がたく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ

	~~[[源宗于]]朝臣~~		源宗于朝臣

	<ruby>あづま<rt>東</rt></ruby><ruby>地<rt>ぢ</rt></ruby>の　<ruby>さや<rt>小夜</rt></ruby>の中山　中／＼に　あひ見てのちぞ　わびしかりける		<ruby>あづま<rt>東</rt></ruby><ruby>地<rt>ぢ</rt></ruby>の　<ruby>さや<rt>小夜</rt></ruby>の中山　中／＼に　あひ見てのちぞ　わびしかりける
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	There was a person he met after great effort, and there was something to be cautious about, and it became hard to meet		There was a person he met after great effort, and there was something to be cautious about, and it became hard to meet

	Lord Minamoto no Muneyuki		[[源宗于\|Lord Minamoto no Muneyuki]]

	On Naka Mountain in Saya we meet so casually -- rather, it is after we meet that I suffer the most.		On [[小夜の中山\|Naka Mountain in Saya]] we meet so casually -- rather, it is after we meet that I suffer the most.

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	「調子がなだらかで、しかも思い悩んでいるさまがよく下句にこめられている」（鑑賞）		「調子がなだらかで、しかも思い悩んでいるさまがよく下句にこめられている」（鑑賞）

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			[[Category:Love]]

Jchristo at 17:26, 2 August 2023

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	;からうして		;からうして
	:This can mean having difficulty, through effort, or eventually. It may come from 辛して.		:This can mean having difficulty, through effort, or eventually. It may come from 辛して. The 日葡辞書 indicates the word was unvoiced, although there seems to be no older evidence than that.

			;つつしむことありて
			:This indicates that there is some issue with them meeting, which is not specified -- it could be a rank difference, not living close to each other, or some other social or political barrier.

	;さやの中山		;さやの中山
	:A mountain in Totomi. Here it serves as a preface to lead into 中々に.~~「遠江也。中々にといはん枕詞也」（八代集抄）~~		:A mountain in Totomi. Here it serves as a preface to lead into 中々に.「遠江也。中々にといはん枕詞也」（八代集抄）The use of this difficult mountain crossing also suggests the difficulty of meeting the woman.

			;中々に
			:Casual.

			;わびし
			:苦しい（選釈）つらい（鑑賞、新注、和歌大系）切ない（全釈、新体系）

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	::On the eastern road, Saya no Nakayama, why did I start casually loving her?		::On the eastern road, Saya no Nakayama, why did I start casually loving her?

	[[SIS 710]]: あひみての後の心にくらぶれば昔は物をおもはざりけり		And the second part is close to a poem found in the ''Akahito Collection'':

			::春霞山にたなびきかくす妹を逢ひ見て後ぞ恋しかりける
			::

			[[SIS 710]] is another similar poem:
			::あひみての後の心にくらぶれば昔は物をおもはざりけり
			::

			The poem's placement at the beginning of the volume may have been intended to build off the love situation in the previous poem to provide a link between the seasonal and love divisions of the collection.

			「調子がなだらかで、しかも思い悩んでいるさまがよく下句にこめられている」（鑑賞）

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Jchristo at 18:53, 1 August 2023

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 * あひしりて] あひそめて（荒・片）、あひて（坊・胡）
 * ひとに] ひとの（荒・片）
-* あひがたく] 又あひがたく (行・中・貞・堀・雲・坊・承・正・正版・八・標*・新・旧大観・評・全), 又えあはず（荒）,又もえあはず（片）、又のひがたく（胡）. Given the overwhelming manuscript support for this reading, even in Teika's own texts, it may seem that its omission in the base text is a mistake. However, in the base text Teika writes 又 in red ink indicating the reading was in the Fujiwara no Yukinari manuscript, suggesting that the omission was intentional, for whatever reason. Kifune is the only modern editor to emend the text, perhaps because the addition of 又 may be more specific but does not really alter the meaning (Kifune does not give this emendation in his 校訂付記 at the end of the book).
+* あひがたく] 又あひがたく (行・中・貞・堀・雲・坊・承・正・正版・八・増*・標*・新・旧大観・評・全), 又えあはず（荒）,又もえあはず（片）、又のひがたく（胡）. Given the overwhelming manuscript support for this reading, even in Teika's own texts, it may seem that its omission in the base text is a mistake. However, in the base text Teika writes 又 in red ink indicating the reading was in the Fujiwara no Yukinari manuscript, suggesting that the omission was intentional, for whatever reason. Kifune is the only modern editor to emend the text, perhaps because the addition of 又 may be more specific but does not really alter the meaning (Kifune does not give this emendation in his 校訂付記 at the end of the book).
 * あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)
 * わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）
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 * [[新時代不同歌合]] ５７. Fifth line こひしかりける.
 * [[五代歌枕]] [[歌枕名寄]]
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Jchristo at 18:51, 31 July 2023

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	* あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)		* あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)
	* わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）		* わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）

			= Other Sources =

			* [[源宗于\|宗于集]]１．Prose preface からうじてあひたる人のさはることありてえあはぬに. Second line さよ(や)のなかやま
			* [[新時代不同歌合]] ５７. Fifth line こひしかりける.
			* [[五代歌枕]] [[歌枕名寄]]

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Jchristo: /* Textual Notes */

2023-07-31T18:43:17Z

Textual Notes

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	* あひしりて] あひそめて（荒・片）、あひて（坊・胡）		* あひしりて] あひそめて（荒・片）、あひて（坊・胡）
	* ひとに] ひとの（荒・片）		* ひとに] ひとの（荒・片）
	* あひがたく] 又あひがたく (~~中・貞・堀・雲・坊・承・正・正版・八・標~~*・新・旧大観・評・全), 又えあはず（荒）,又もえあはず（片）、又のひがたく（胡）		* あひがたく] 又あひがたく (行・中・貞・堀・雲・坊・承・正・正版・八・標*・新・旧大観・評・全), 又えあはず（荒）,又もえあはず（片）、又のひがたく（胡）. Given the overwhelming manuscript support for this reading, even in Teika's own texts, it may seem that its omission in the base text is a mistake. However, in the base text Teika writes 又 in red ink indicating the reading was in the Fujiwara no Yukinari manuscript, suggesting that the omission was intentional, for whatever reason. Kifune is the only modern editor to emend the text, perhaps because the addition of 又 may be more specific but does not really alter the meaning (Kifune does not give this emendation in his 校訂付記 at the end of the book).
	* あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)		* あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)
	* わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）		* わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）

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Jchristo at 18:39, 31 July 2023

2023-07-31T18:39:17Z

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	からうして<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>しりて<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ける<ruby>ひと<rt>人</rt></ruby>につゝむことありて、<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>がたく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ		からうして<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>しりて<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ける<ruby>ひと<rt>人</rt></ruby>につゝむことありて、<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>がたく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ

	~~源宗于朝臣~~		[[源宗于]]朝臣

	<ruby>あづま<rt>東</rt></ruby><ruby>地<rt>ぢ</rt></ruby>の　<ruby>さや<rt>小夜</rt></ruby>の中山　中／＼に　あひ見てのちぞ　わびしかりける		<ruby>あづま<rt>東</rt></ruby><ruby>地<rt>ぢ</rt></ruby>の　<ruby>さや<rt>小夜</rt></ruby>の中山　中／＼に　あひ見てのちぞ　わびしかりける

	</div>		</div>

			= Translation =

			There was a person he met after great effort, and there was something to be cautious about, and it became hard to meet

			Lord Minamoto no Muneyuki

			On Naka Mountain in Saya we meet so casually -- rather, it is after we meet that I suffer the most.

			= Textual Notes =

			* あひしりて] あひそめて（荒・片）、あひて（坊・胡）
			* ひとに] ひとの（荒・片）
			* あひがたく] 又あひがたく (中・貞・堀・雲・坊・承・正・正版・八・標*・新・旧大観・評・全), 又えあはず（荒）,又もえあはず（片）、又のひがたく（胡）
			* あひ見て] いひ見て (堀*)
			* わびしかりける] こひしかりける (雲・標ィ)、かなしかりける（坊）

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Jchristo: /* Text */

2023-07-31T18:20:50Z

Text

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	源宗于朝臣		源宗于朝臣

	~~あづま地の　さやの中山　中／＼に　あひ見てのちぞ　わびしかりける~~		<ruby>あづま<rt>東</rt></ruby><ruby>地<rt>ぢ</rt></ruby>の　<ruby>さや<rt>小夜</rt></ruby>の中山　中／＼に　あひ見てのちぞ　わびしかりける

	</div>		</div>

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Jchristo at 18:19, 31 July 2023

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	<div class="honmon">		<div class="honmon">

	[[GSS 506\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_1\|Volume 1 Contents]] \| [[GSS 508\|Next poem]]		からうして<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>しりて<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ける<ruby>ひと<rt>人</rt></ruby>につゝむことありて、<ruby>あひ<rt>逢</rt></ruby>がたく<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt></ruby>ければ

			源宗于朝臣

			あづま地の　さやの中山　中／＼に　あひ見てのちぞ　わびしかりける

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