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2024-01-05T14:55:49Z

Textual Notes

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	** おはしましけるに] おはしけるに（堀・雲）、おはしましける（標ィ）		** おはしましけるに] おはしけるに（堀・雲）、おはしましける（標ィ）
	** さはること侍て] さはることありて（中・片・堀・坊・承・正・標ィ）、さはることありければ（荒）		** さはること侍て] さはることありて（中・片・堀・坊・承・正・標ィ）、さはることありければ（荒）
	** えつかうまつらで] えつかうまつらずして（行・貞・堀・雲・安ィ・八・増・新・標*~~・生保版本・旧国）、つかうまつらで（荒）~~		** えつかうまつらで] えつかうまつらずして（行・貞・堀・雲・安ィ・八・増・新・標*・正版・旧国）、つかうまつらで（荒）
	** 延光朝臣に] 信光朝臣の許に（堀）、延光朝臣のかり（荒・片）、延光朝臣の許に（中・雲・標ィ）		** 延光朝臣に] 信光朝臣の許に（堀）、延光朝臣のかり（荒・片）、延光朝臣の許に（中・雲・標ィ）
	** 左大臣] 左大臣実頼（堀・雲）		** 左大臣] 左大臣実頼（堀・雲）

2023-08-08T16:12:35Z

Textual Notes

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	** おはしましけるに] おはしけるに（堀・雲）、おはしましける（標ィ）		** おはしましけるに] おはしけるに（堀・雲）、おはしましける（標ィ）
	** さはること侍て] さはることありて（中・片・堀・坊・承・正・標ィ）、さはることありければ（荒）		** さはること侍て] さはることありて（中・片・堀・坊・承・正・標ィ）、さはることありければ（荒）
	** えつかうまつらで] えつかうまつらずして（行・貞・堀・雲・安ィ・八・増・新・標*~~・旧国）、つかうまつらで（荒）~~		** えつかうまつらで] えつかうまつらずして（行・貞・堀・雲・安ィ・八・増・新・標*・生保版本・旧国）、つかうまつらで（荒）
	** 延光朝臣に] 信光朝臣の許に（堀）、延光朝臣のかり（荒・片）、延光朝臣の許に（中・雲・標ィ）		** 延光朝臣に] 信光朝臣の許に（堀）、延光朝臣のかり（荒・片）、延光朝臣の許に（中・雲・標ィ）
	** 左大臣] 左大臣実頼（堀・雲）		** 左大臣] 左大臣実頼（堀・雲）

2023-06-09T15:09:36Z

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	Minister of the Left [Fujiwara no Saneyori]		Minister of the Left [Fujiwara no Saneyori]

	I will not pick pines or ~~pluck~~ young shoots ~~(1-2) / so it has become /~~ when, cherry blossoms / I wish ~~that~~ you would bloom soon!		It has become such that I will not pick pines or young shoots; oh when, cherry blossoms, I wish you would bloom soon!

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2023-05-22T17:37:30Z

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	= Translation =		= Translation =

			Retired Emperor Suzaku was attending the Day of the Rat festivities, and there was something inconvenient for [Saneyori], and he was unable to accompany [the Emperor], and he sent this to Lord Nobumitsu.

			Minister of the Left [Fujiwara no Saneyori]

			I will not pick pines or pluck young shoots (1-2) / so it has become / when, cherry blossoms / I wish that you would bloom soon!

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	;成ぬるを		;成ぬるを
	:		:The を here is followed by a reaction to the situation in the first part of the poem.

			;さかなむ
			:なむ, on the MZ of a verb, acts like modern ～てほしい (a wish for someone or something else to do something).

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2023-05-19T19:15:19Z

Poem

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	== Poem ==		== Poem ==

			;松もひきわかなもつまず
			:The ず negative applies to both ひく and つむ.

			;成ぬるを
			:

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2023-05-19T19:03:21Z

2023-05-19T19:02:51Z

Notes

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 :This is read variously as すざく、しゅじゃく, and すじゃく, but すざく is typically the head entry in dictionaries. There may or may not be a の before 院. The term 院 refers to a building, but also a retired Emperor (by reference to the building they live in after their abdication). Since more than one Emperor could live in the same building there is sometimes some uncertainty about which one is meant -- the pre-modern commentaries identify this as Emperor Uda, but modern commentaries all say this is Emperor Suzaku instead. 「みかどにゐさせ給て、十六年おはしまして後におりさせ給ておはしましけるをぞ、朱雀院のみかどとは申ける」（栄花物語）
+;子日
 == Poem ==

2023-05-19T18:20:57Z

Text

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	<div class="honmon">		<div class="honmon">

	~~朱雀院の子日におはしましけるに、さはること~~<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt><ruby>て、え<ruby>つかう<rt>仕</rt></ruby>まつらで、<ruby>延光朝臣<rt>のぶみつのあそむ</rt></ruby>につかはしける		<ruby>朱雀院<rt>すざくゐん</rt></ruby>の<ruby>子日<rt>ねのひ</rt></ruby>におはしましけるに、さはること<ruby>侍<rt>はべり</rt><ruby>て、え<ruby>つかう<rt>仕</rt></ruby>まつらで、<ruby>延光朝臣<rt>のぶみつのあそむ</rt></ruby>につかはしける

	左大臣		左大臣

2023-05-19T18:20:11Z

Notes

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	= Notes =		= Notes =

			== Preface ==

			;朱雀院
			:This is read variously as すざく、しゅじゃく, and すじゃく, but すざく is typically the head entry in dictionaries. There may or may not be a の before 院. The term 院 refers to a building, but also a retired Emperor (by reference to the building they live in after their abdication). Since more than one Emperor could live in the same building there is sometimes some uncertainty about which one is meant -- the pre-modern commentaries identify this as Emperor Uda, but modern commentaries all say this is Emperor Suzaku instead. 「みかどにゐさせ給て、十六年おはしまして後におりさせ給ておはしましけるをぞ、朱雀院のみかどとは申ける」（栄花物語）

			;

			== Poem ==

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

2023-05-19T18:09:16Z

Analysis

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			[[Category:Personal Poem]]