GSS 2 - Revision history

Jchristo at 14:24, 25 January 2023

2023-01-25T14:24:03Z

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	[[Category:Spring]]		[[Category:Spring]]
	[[Category:Snow]]		[[Category:Snow]]
	[[Category:Flowers]		[[Category:Flowers]]
	[[Category:Calendar]]		[[Category:Calendar]]

Jchristo at 15:19, 24 January 2023

2023-01-24T15:19:55Z

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	[[GSS 1\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_1\|Volume 1 Contents]] \| [[GSS 3\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 1\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_1\|Volume 1 Contents]] \| [[GSS 3\|Next poem]]

			[[Category:Spring]]
			[[Category:Snow]]
			[[Category:Flowers]
			[[Category:Calendar]]

Jchristo: /* Analysis */

2023-01-24T15:19:14Z

Analysis

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	The image of snow confused for flowers is one that goes back to Chinese poetry. In the Japanese tradition, the theme occurs in the MY, as well as the KKS. [[KKS 7]] (poet unknown) is particularly close to Mitsune's poem: 心ざしふかくそめてし折りければきえあへぬ雪の花と見ゆらむ		The image of snow confused for flowers is one that goes back to Chinese poetry. In the Japanese tradition, the theme occurs in the MY, as well as the KKS. [[KKS 7]] (poet unknown) is particularly close to Mitsune's poem: 心ざしふかくそめてし折りければきえあへぬ雪の花と見ゆらむ

			「春を待つ心は、花を待ち望む心」（全釈）


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Jchristo: /* Notes */

2023-01-24T15:17:43Z

Notes

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	;消えあへぬ雪		;消えあへぬ雪
	:Rather than simply meaning "snow that has not yet vanished", 竹岡正雄 in his comments to [[KKS 7]] says that this specifically indicates snow that should be melting (because it's now spring) and is about to melt, but has not melted yet. Katagiri's comments in the 古今和歌集全評釈 seem to support this reading.		:Rather than simply meaning "snow that has not yet vanished", 竹岡正雄 in his comments to [[KKS 7]] says that this specifically indicates snow that should be melting (because it's now spring) and is about to melt, but has not melted yet. Katagiri's comments in the 古今和歌集全評釈 seem to support this reading.

			;見ゆらん
			:Along with the からに, 全釈 says that this expresses a reason ("Is it because we just heard 'spring has come' that the snow looks like flowers"). Other modern translations also support this reading.

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Jchristo: /* Translation */

2023-01-24T15:13:09Z

Translation

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	Ōshikōchi no Mitsune		Ōshikōchi no Mitsune

	"Spring has come" / having heard this / Kasuga Mountain's / ~~difficult to melt~~ / snow seems to look like flowers.		"Spring has come" / having heard this / Kasuga Mountain's / not yet vanished / snow seems to look like flowers.

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Jchristo: /* Translation */

2023-01-24T15:12:55Z

Translation

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	Ōshikōchi no Mitsune		Ōshikōchi no Mitsune

	"Spring has come" / having heard this / Kasuga Mountain's / difficult to melt / snow ~~looks~~ like flowers.		"Spring has come" / having heard this / Kasuga Mountain's / difficult to melt / snow seems to look like flowers.

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Jchristo: /* Notes */

2023-01-24T15:11:42Z

Notes

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	:つる is the RT of the つ auxiliary, showing completion. からに means "as soon as..."		:つる is the RT of the つ auxiliary, showing completion. からに means "as soon as..."

	;~~消えあへぬ~~		;消えあへぬ雪
	:		:Rather than simply meaning "snow that has not yet vanished", 竹岡正雄 in his comments to [[KKS 7]] says that this specifically indicates snow that should be melting (because it's now spring) and is about to melt, but has not melted yet. Katagiri's comments in the 古今和歌集全評釈 seem to support this reading.

	= Analysis =		= Analysis =

Jchristo at 21:00, 23 January 2023

2023-01-23T21:00:13Z

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	;ききつるからに		;ききつるからに
	:つる is the RT of the つ auxiliary, showing completion. からに means "as soon as..."		:つる is the RT of the つ auxiliary, showing completion. からに means "as soon as..."

			;消えあへぬ
			:

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Jchristo: /* Analysis */

2023-01-23T18:25:50Z

Analysis

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	Although Kasuga plains appears in several KKS spring poems ([[KKS 17\|17]], [[KKS 19\|19]], [[KKS 22\|22]]), Kasuga mountain only appears in [[KKS 364\|poem 364]], a "celebration" poem where it's used by association with the Nara Shrine on it. The mountain does appear in the MYS with spring associations, such as poem 1845:		Although Kasuga plains appears in several KKS spring poems ([[KKS 17\|17]], [[KKS 19\|19]], [[KKS 22\|22]]), Kasuga mountain only appears in [[KKS 364\|poem 364]], a "celebration" poem where it's used by association with the Nara Shrine on it. The mountain does appear in the MYS with spring associations, such as poem 1845:

	::~~鴬の春になるらし春日山霞たなびく夜目に見れども~~		::鶯之　春成良思　春日山　霞棚引　夜目見侶
			::うぐひすの　はるになるらし　かすがやま　かすみたなびく　よめにみれども
	::It seems to have become the warbler's spring. Even though I see mist on Kasuga Mountain at night.		::It seems to have become the warbler's spring. Even though I see mist on Kasuga Mountain at night.

	Also 1843, which appears in a variant form as [[~~Shuishu 1#3\|~~SIS 3]].		Also 1843, which appears in a variant form as [[SIS 3]].

	::~~昨日こそ年は果てしか春霞春日の山に早立ちにけり~~		::昨日社　年者極之賀　春霞　春日山尓　速立尓来
			::きのふこそ　としははてしか　はるかすみ　かすがのやまに　はやたちにけり
	::Yesterday the year ended, and today the spring mist is rising on Kasuga Mountain.		::Yesterday the year ended, and today the spring mist is rising on Kasuga Mountain.

	Using Kasuga Mountain with snow, however, seems specific to Mitsune's poem, and the image does not occur in later imperial anthologies.		Using Kasuga Mountain with snow, however, seems specific to Mitsune's poem, and the image does not occur in later imperial anthologies.

	The image of snow confused for flowers is one that goes back to Chinese poetry. In the Japanese tradition, the theme occurs in the MY, as well as the KKS. [[KKS 7]] (poet unknown) is particularly close to Mitsune's poem.		The image of snow confused for flowers is one that goes back to Chinese poetry. In the Japanese tradition, the theme occurs in the MY, as well as the KKS. [[KKS 7]] (poet unknown) is particularly close to Mitsune's poem: 心ざしふかくそめてし折りければきえあへぬ雪の花と見ゆらむ

	~~国１巻‐ 1 古今 7~~ 心ざしふかくそめてし折りければきえあへぬ雪の花と見ゆらむ


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Jchristo at 18:21, 23 January 2023

2023-01-23T18:21:48Z

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	Following the KKS precedent, the GSS continues the spring volume with poems evoking the lingering snow of early spring, and the clash between the calendar season and the natural world. This is a public, occasional poem typical of the KKS style. Kudo notes that putting 立春 after 正月一日 is peculiar to the GSS.		Following the KKS precedent, the GSS continues the spring volume with poems evoking the lingering snow of early spring, and the clash between the calendar season and the natural world. This is a public, occasional poem typical of the KKS style. Kudo notes that putting 立春 after 正月一日 is peculiar to the GSS.

	Although Kasuga plains appears in several KKS spring poems ([[~~Kokinshu~~ 17\|17]], [[~~Kokinshu~~ 19\|19]], [[~~Kokinshu~~ 22\|22]]), Kasuga mountain only appears in [[~~Kokinshu~~ 364\|poem 364]], a "celebration" poem where it's used by association with the Nara Shrine on it. The mountain does appear in the MYS with spring associations, such as poem 1845:		Although Kasuga plains appears in several KKS spring poems ([[KKS 17\|17]], [[KKS 19\|19]], [[KKS 22\|22]]), Kasuga mountain only appears in [[KKS 364\|poem 364]], a "celebration" poem where it's used by association with the Nara Shrine on it. The mountain does appear in the MYS with spring associations, such as poem 1845:

	::鴬の春になるらし春日山霞たなびく夜目に見れども		::鴬の春になるらし春日山霞たなびく夜目に見れども
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	Using Kasuga Mountain with snow, however, seems specific to Mitsune's poem, and the image does not occur in later imperial anthologies.		Using Kasuga Mountain with snow, however, seems specific to Mitsune's poem, and the image does not occur in later imperial anthologies.

	The image of snow confused for flowers is one that goes back to Chinese poetry. In the Japanese tradition, the theme occurs in the MY, as well as the KKS. [[~~Kokinshu 7\|~~KKS 7]] (poet unknown) is particularly close to Mitsune's poem.		The image of snow confused for flowers is one that goes back to Chinese poetry. In the Japanese tradition, the theme occurs in the MY, as well as the KKS. [[KKS 7]] (poet unknown) is particularly close to Mitsune's poem.

			国１巻‐ 1 古今 7 心ざしふかくそめてし折りければきえあへぬ雪の花と見ゆらむ


	[[GSS 1\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_1\|Volume 1 Contents]] \| [[GSS 3\|Next poem]]		[[GSS 1\|Previous poem]] \| [[GSS_Volume_1\|Volume 1 Contents]] \| [[GSS 3\|Next poem]]